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Is it too hard to understand the complex of a child?
When it e'er by lightning hit, constant strain dear Ares -  yet Venus...
How Her Tradition Hates all unlike, A prim bonnet I fuss
Not I! not I! Your li'l hen dressed ever so quaint yet wild.

T'was not to be her little Bow-Peep in pedastle high
No allure have I, save a wave to each ever-foul suitor
Ne'er to meet Aphrodite. Who's in my bosom Not. Sighs
Of fire from mine mouth spurt. No, no tea today dictator.

A disgrace - her only inscription of me . Chissle it deep,
I dare Her foul whore, though of the same planet us both born.
Cursed by the curves now free - astray from her once grew forlorn.
Battle's raged since my birth the gods confused. Truth could not keep

Hidden. Suffocating me - burning ash engulphing sore
Lungs. Customs heaped on me. Whispers: Failure. No need wile'n
to whisper Her venom! Laugh. Mock me more you bloody whore
Her imaginary world now comes crashing! Hadn't she known

She could not win?
Natural appearance deceives
Because sweet slut -
Soul and Mind I am a son of Ares.
©2007-2009 ~vagranttomato
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Author's Comments

Date of Completion: April 26, 2006
Rhyme Scheme: ABBA CDCD EFFE DGDG HIJI

The last stanza is actually meant to be arranged differently than it appears, with each line being somewhat scattered about and not aligned to the left. This was done with the intent of forcing the reader to read more slowly.

Since I'm not doing any photomanips, or art at all while preparing for tests, I thought to myself "Heck, why not post some of your older poetry in the event people actually read it." Note, this is not a typical poem that I think many people put on dA. For one, it has a fixed rhyme scheme I devised as well as a meter pattern. Its actually rather complex.
I had fun with it, the emotions sound pretty strong when I look back on it, but I was actually just really bored.

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